ACTIVE PROJECTS

Short: "21 Parking Tickets"

Sunday, June 27, 2010

Ending Fix Part 2

Due: 07-01-10

Ending Fix Part 2

So you’ve fixed the ending to a film.  Now you are going to have to fix one of the films your peers selected and you have to do a better job than they did.  Naturally they are going to fix yours. 

When you actually go for a job in scriptwriting a large part of it is competing against other writers, just like any other job, so get use to it.

So your homework is to watch the film you are assigned and then fix the ending.

Good luck!

Below is a list of films that were selected with a link to the entire film chopped up into sequential parts courtesy of the YouTube community.


Kassandre - A.I. Artifical Inteligence

Iden - Law Abiding Citizen

Vera - Minority Report

Ryan - The Mist



Friday, June 18, 2010

Research for Script

Due: 06-24-10

Research for Script

The goal of this is to learn how to first research a unique topic that you know nothing about and second to incorporate it into a five page short script of your creation.  I’ll give you an example. 

One night many years ago I got a call from a friend who had just gotten a short contract to be one of the writers on a “Like Water for Chocolate” American version rip off.  It’s based on a Mexican novel about a girl that is such an amazing cook that when people taste her food it brings tears to their eyes. 

Now my friend, who is a good writer, unfortunately knew absolutely nothing about cooking and in this day and age not knowing how to cook is like not knowing how to fuck.  My humble opinion at least.

So I got the call at about 2 AM and she frantically confesses she doesn’t know anything about even the simplest of dishes accept that some things taste better than others.  The next day she needed to have a small 2-page scene on how to make an omelet, which of course was something she had never done.

Easiest recipe you can start with.  Take 3 eggs, add a splash of milk or whipping cream, grind a dash of pepper into it and toss a sprinkle of salt on top.  Beat vigorously for 3 minutes at least.  Set your stove top to medium low, grease the bottom of a pan with a stick of butter, pour the mixture over the butter, once it foams, place a lid on.  Then grind some cheese, shred some thin sliced sandwich meat, add to one side of the omelet, and cover with a lid.  Once it looks cooked through and the cheese is melted, spank the pan on the burner to loosen the bottom of it while slide it around a bit.  Flip one side, let seal for a few seconds and then serve.  Garnish as you wish.  Simple enough.

She makes one mistake though.  She uses olive oil instead of milk.  Disaster ensues and she looses her contract for that project later the next day.  Her contract was for two weeks but she lost it about two days in.  Not a bad person, not a bad writer, but she just didn’t do her homework and the sad thing is she had about a month to get ready for it.  It’s not like she had to become Julia Child overnight.   She just didn’t put in that extra bit of effort and that two week job, ten days total actually, was worth $5,000.  In the end she only got a $1,000 from it.  Way it is…

So learn how to do this now.  Take one of the three choices you selected in class and run with it. 

Good luck!

Derek:
1.)    Fly Fishing
2.)    Car Maintenance
3.)    Football Play Calls

Iden:
1.)    Backgammon
2.)    Proper Military Lingo
3.)    Wilderness Survival

Jeanette:
1.)    Build a Dog House
2.)    How to Build Theater Sets
3.)    Internet Radio Broadcasting

Kassandre:
1.)    History of Halo
2.)    Stock Market
3.)    How a Car Engine Works

Vera:
1.)    Canning Food
2.)    Baccarat
3.)    How Close Captioning Works


Top places to do research:

    http://www.wikipedia.org/

    http://www.howstuffworks.com/



Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Ending Fix

Due: 06-17-10

Ending Fix

Have you ever seen a movie that was awesome except for the last 5 minutes when it just goes to complete shit?   You probably sat there, pissed off, wondering what the hell the makers were thinking.  Perhaps you were so mad you even wanted to change the ending yourself.

This is your chance to actually do that.

Vera for instance is going to rewrite the ending of The Mist which is a solid choice on her part.  That ending was one of the most fucked ones I ever saw in my life.  Hell I almost picked it but she beat me to it.

So here is your homework for Thursday.  Pick a movie that needs a better ending.  You can only fix 5 pages towards the end.  No more, no less.

Good luck and see you on Thursday!

Peace,
-Ryan

P.S.  Go ahead and sound off below in the comments on the worst movie endings ever…   I'm going with Knowing.